Stage One – The Set Up
Chapter One -This sucks. First chapters are the worst. Hook? Hook? Gah! I hate hooks. I’m clearly hook-illiterate.
Chapter Two – Okay, maybe this isn’t quite so bad. New POV, the setting works, I’m getting into the story. And wow, I sorta like my characters.
Chapter Three – What was I thinking??? This is the most contrived piece of crap ever. And melodramatic? Argh. Sounds like a bad version of Days Of Our Lives. I’ll probably get sued.
Chapter Four – Push through, push through, just keep pushing.
Chapter Five – Getting into … Read more »








