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Monday, May 30th, 2011
Release Day 2 (Part 2) – Win LOVE DRUNK COWBOY from Carolyn Brown!

Carolyn Brown‘s latest release is LOVE DRUNK COWBOY:

She’s a self-made city girl…

High-powered career woman Austin Lanier suddenly finds herself saddled with an inherited watermelon farm deep in the countryside. She’s determined to sell the farm, until her new, drop-dead sexy neighbor Rye O’Donnell shows up…

He’s as intoxicating as can be…

Rancher Rye O’Donnell thinks he’s going to get a good deal on his dream property-until he meets the fiery new owner. Rye is knocked sideways when he realizes that not only is Granny Lanier’s city-slicker granddaughter a savvy businesswoman, she’s also sexy as hell…

Suddenly Rye is a whole lot less interested in real estate and a whole lot more focused on getting Austin to set aside her stiletto heels…

“Fun, sassy, and fast-paced romance.”
-RT Book Reviews

PURCHASE BOOK: Amazon, Barnes & Noble

To win a copy of LOVE DRUNK COWBOY, tell me the name of the last book you read featuring a cowboy.

(Note: This drawing is open internationally.)

Monday, May 30th, 2011
Release Day 2 (Part 1) – Win the first two Jaguar Warrior books by Juliana Stone!

If you haven’t yet read Juliana Stone‘s Jaguar Warrior series, you’ll want to enter this contest. Juliana’s upcoming release is book three in the series, HIS DARKEST SALVATION:

In a world on the brink of chaos, passion and vengeance collide …

After six months in hell, Julian Castille has returned to the world a changed man. No longer the calm, powerful CEO, but a shifter fully embraced by the blood of his clan. Julian has one goal: find the key to the portal that stands between the human realm and unprecedented darkness—and win back the pieces of his soul. The last thing he needs is a distraction like the beautiful, enigmatic Jaden DaCosta.

Three years ago, a forbidden night of passion left Jaden forever altered: mated to Julian Castille–bound to a man who despises her. But the temptation to trust this darker, more savage—and more captivating—Julian is overwhelming. And as they fight for their immortal souls, their insatiable desire for each other may prove their fatal undoing…

An enthralling world! Juliana Stone is on her way to becoming a paranormal favorite!”
#1 NYT Bestselling Author Sherrilyn Kenyon

PREORDER BOOKAmazon, Amazon Canada, Barnes & Noble, B-A-M, Borders, Chapters, IndieBound, Powell’s

To enter to win a copy of the first two Jaguar Warrior books, HIS DARKEST HUNGER and HIS DARKEST EMBRACE, simply tell me…are you a fan of shape-shifter books? And if so, what’s your favorite shape shifter book to date?

(Note: This drawing is open internationally.)

Sunday, May 29th, 2011
Release Week Day 1 (Part 3) – Win Katharine Ashe’s CAPTURED BY A ROGUE LORD!

Katharine Ashe’s latest release is CAPTURED BY A ROGUE LORD:

She would marry no man…

Serena Carlyle dreams of a happily ever after. Firmly on the shelf at twenty-five, instead she’s determined to find the perfect match for her beautiful younger sister. What better prospect than their neighbor, the wealthy, rakishly handsome Earl of Savege? Now Serena can beg his help in halting a local band of smugglers. Then, one night, stealing away from yet another disappointing ball, Serena finds herself trapped alone with a stranger …

Until he captured her—body and soul

His kiss was irresistible, his caress unforgettable, and he hides a devastating secret. A Robin Hood upon the sea, Alex Savege is the brazen pirate Redstone, seizing the yachts of spoiled noblemen to settle an old debt. Serena needs a hero, but her heart is in the gravest danger—for it is soon to be captured by a man as skilled at seduction as he is at plunder.

Praise
“He’s the ideal, sexy, honorable pirate readers dream of.”
RT Book Reviews, Top Pick!

PURCHASE:  The Regulator Bookshop | Amazon | Barnes & Noble | Books A Million | Borders | Indiebound

To win a copy of CAPTURED BY A ROGUE LORD, tell me if you’re a pirate fan, a Robin Hood fan or both!

(Note: This drawing is open to US & Canada residents only.)

Sunday, May 29th, 2011
Release Week Day 1 (Part 2) – win Sophie Jordan’s SURRENDER TO ME!

Next up…awesome author Sophie Jordan! Sophie’s latest release is IN SCANDAL THEY WED:

What kind of woman would marry a man she only just met?
The kind with nothing to lose.

Long ago, Evelyn Cross sacrificed her good name, her freedom, and any hope for love. Now, in the remote English countryside, she struggles to survive and avoid the scandal threatening to destroy all she holds dear . . . until a sinfully handsome viscount arrives on her doorstep, offering marriage, salvation, and tempting her with so much more . . .

What kind of man would marry a woman he only just met?
The kind bound by duty.

Fresh from war, Spencer Lockhart returns home to claim his title and right the wrong his cousin perpetrated upon Evelyn Cross. In need of a wife, his marrying her is a small price to pay for duty. But when he meets her, the fiery chit is not what he expects to find in a ruined lady. As desire flares hotly between them, honor is the last thing on his mind . . .

What kind of man and woman would marry when they’ve only just met?
The kind who could ignite a scandal with just one touch.

Available at: Amazon.com, Barnes and Noble

Praise
“Sizzling sexual tension … thoroughly satisfying …”
- Publishers Weekly

To win a copy of Sophie’s SURRENDER TO ME, answer this question:  

What was the last historical romance you read? And if you’ve never read one…why the heck not?

(Please note: This giveaway is open to US residents only.)

Sunday, May 29th, 2011
Release Week Day 1 (Part 1) – Win a Donna Grant book!

First up on day one of release week…Donna Grant‘s latest in her Dark Sword Series…UNTAMED HIGHLANDER

The Dark Sword series reins in the magic, passion, and fury of Scotland’s legendary warriors—for whom love is always worth fighting for…

DEVIL IN THE FLESH

Druid-born and magic-blessed, Isla is one of the deadliest she-devils ever to serve the forces of darkness. As an immortal Highland warrior, it’s up to Hayden Campbell to destroy her and her kind. But for Hayden, Isla is more than a sworn enemy. She is temptation…

ANGEL IN HIS ARMS

Taking Isla captive, Hayden hopes to avenge his kinsmen who died by Druid magic. But when he looks into Isla’s eyes, he sees the secrets of her past. When he touches her skin, he feels the passion in her soul. And soon Hayden comes to realize that this beautiful, beguiling woman is not his enemy at all—she is his destiny. And, even as the forces of darkness conspire against them, their love will conquer all…

Praise
“Wonderful characters with depth, charm and sensuality and a dark, brilliantly told tale brimming with emotion and sexual attraction all captivate.”
-RT Book Reviews, 4.5 stars – Top Pick!

Order Book
Mass Market Paperback: Barnes & Noble, BAMBordersPowells, AmazonTargetIndieBound, St. Martin’s Press

 To enter to win a copy of either DANGEROUS HIGHLANDER, FORBIDDEN HIGHLANDER, or WICKED HIGHLANDER (your choice!), leave me a comment and tell me if you’re a fan of hot highlanders!

(Note: This drawing is open internationally.)

 

Saturday, May 28th, 2011
It’s Release Week!!!

I’m so excited that BODYGUARDS IN BED is finally here!

To kick off  this fabulous collection of three hot and spicy romantic suspense novellas, I’m hosting a release party starting on Sunday, May 29th and running through Saturday June 4th. Stop by every day to see some great new books, meet some fabulous authors and enter to win incredible prizes. I’ll be posting several authors/prizes per day, so be sure to check back often! All you have to do to enter for each prize is leave a comment on that post. Super easy!

***This post will remain at the top of the page, so to enter for prizes during release week, scroll down***

And now, in case you’ve forgotten…a little more fun info about BODYGUARDS IN BED:

There’s just one cardinal rule when it comes to being a bodyguard: no matter how tempting it may be, never, ever get romantically involved with the person you’re supposed to be protecting. But as these sensual novellas prove, even the most important rules are made to be broken–again and again and again. Join acclaimed authors Lucy Monroe, Jamie Denton, and Elisabeth Naughton as they open the files on an undercover operative who finds a sexy surprise under his covers, a hot case involving mixed messages and mistaken identities, and a mission impossible protecting a provocative beauty who lives to love dangerously.

Yeah, it’s a hard job,
but someone’s gotta do it.

Order: Amazon, Barnes & Noble, B-A-M, Borders, Chapters, IndieBound, Powell’s

Praise:
“Three novellas form this well-mixed anthology of bodyguards who violate the big rule: no personal attachment to the client. Variety and plenty of spice make for entertaining summer reading.”
Publishers Weekly

“Naughton’s tale is the best of the three, with real action and plot, scorching sex and a surprising heroine.”
RT Bookreviews

IN HONOR OF RELEASE DAY, MAY 31, 2011,
I’M GIVING AWAY THREE AUTOGRAPHED COPIES OF BODYGUARDS IN BED. TO ENTER, LEAVE ME A COMMENT HERE TELLING ME WHY YOU WANT TO READ THIS AWESOME ANTHOLOGY!!!

(And be sure to scroll down for some other fabulous giveaways all week long.)

Thursday, May 12th, 2011
New Cover! (And other random “stuff”)

I absolutely LOVE what LYX has done with the German covers of the Stolen Trilogy. This one is for STOLEN SEDUCTION:

Is that gorgeous or what? If you want to see all three covers together (or order your own German copies of any or all), you can go HERE. These books are really gorgeous with flip open covers and thick, heavy paper.

In other news…I’m sure most of you have heard the news this morning that Facebook is changing its rules regarding contests and giveaways. I was planning a big FB giveaway contest for release week of BODYGUARDS IN BED, but with the new rule changes it looks like I’ll be running the contest here instead. I have some GREAT author giveaways lined up, including prizes from:

Zoe Archer
Donna Grant
Monica Burns
Sophie Jordan
Katharine Ashe
Ashley March
Vanessa Kelly
Carolyne Brown
Marie Force
Christy Reece
Joyce Lamp
Anita Clenney
Stephani Sloane
Cynthia Eden
C.H. Admirand, and
Kris Kennedy

More info to come soon, but keep a watch out for some fabulous authors, some awesome books and some truly great prizes. The contest will run release week for BODYGUARDS IN BED, from Sunday May 29, 2011 to Sunday June 5, 2011.

Saturday, April 16th, 2011
New Excerpt from TEMPTED

I’m mired down in ENRAPTURED right now, trying to finish it up by my deadline, but as I was doing copy edits last week for TEMPTED I thought it’d be fun to post a scene to tide readers over. I do have to warn you, it was hard to find a scene that wouldn’t confuse everyone. So much is happening in this book and there’s a lot of action right from the start. Everything builds from there.

So this is from TEMPTED, a pivotal point for Isadora and Demetrius. If you remember in the end of ENTWINED, Isadora goes missing from the castle  just before she’s supposed to be bound to Zander.

I hope you enjoy!!

***

TemptedDemetrius pushed up from the ground and turned so fast, he stumbled and nearly fell on his ass.

Graceful, dickhead. And really fucking heroic. If you wanted to stare at her body, you should have left that sheer black nightgown on her instead of giving her your shirt.

Pinching the bridge of his nose, he tried to wipe away the image of Isadora’s near-naked lower half from his mind. Which was as productive as trying to open the friggin’ portal right this minute, because all he could see was her sleek bare legs, those creamy inner thighs, that little treasure that was hidden just under the hem of his shirt…

His face grew hot, and his pulse beat so hard he could hear the blood pounding in his veins. Dammit, he didn’t want her. He didn’t like her. She wasn’t even his type.

He thought back to that girl at the club. The dominatrix with the delta tattoo and fuck-me boots. Now she was his type. She was the kind of female he was attracted to. The only kind he deserved.

Isadora cleared her throat. Scowling, he glanced sideways and saw she’d crossed her good leg over her bad and pulled his shirt down over both legs as far as she could, then wrapped her arms around herself in a don’t-even-look-at-me move he’d have to be a moron to miss.

Okay, just fucking refocus.

He stalked across the ground, picked up what was left of his weapons. He was going to need to make more. The invisibility spell he’d cast on the edge of the cliff wouldn’t last long, and with the sun setting, they needed to find shelter. Two days on this island had already taught him the really nasty stuff came out at night.

“I didn’t realize you were a…” Isadora swallowed. “A witch.”

“I’m not.”

“Yeah, right.” Louder, she added, “You’re from Jason’s line. It shouldn’t surprise me, since he shacked up with a sorceress. Do the other Argonauts know?”

“I don’t give a flying rat’s ass what they know.”

“That would be a no,” she muttered.

Her disgust hit him square in the chest, and before he could stop it, that blackness circled, latched on, and squeezed. “I also don’t care what you think you know. But don’t lump me in with your little witch friends. I’m not the one who turned you over to a warlock.” I’m the one who fucking saved you, dammit. He reached for another broken spear from the ground.

“Oh my gods,” Isadora whispered. “Apophis’s witches. You were there.”

Her shocked voice brought his head up, and too late he realized, bingo. Thanks to him, her brain had just snapped back into gear. She’d been out the whole time they’d been here, while he’d been getting his ass kicked, trying to find a way off this damn island and at the same time making sure nothing snacked on her when he wasn’t looking. And though it would have been nice if she’d been awake instead of deadweight during all that, her consciousness now ignited a whole other set of problems. Namely, what did she really remember, and how the hell was he going to explain any of this?

Way to go, dumbass.

“I…I didn’t think anyone was going to find me.”

He definitely didn’t need to hear the quiver in her voice. And he sure as hell didn’t want to think about what that twisted warlock had done to her in the hours she’d been in his castle. Demetrius had already played every scenario around in his head a dozen times, then promised himself that when he got off this freakin’ island, he’d go back and kick some warlock ass just to settle the score.

“How did you find me?”

Her soft words cut through his thoughts, and a little voice in the back of his head cautioned, Ignore her. But instead of listening, he heard himself say, “Your handmaiden.”

“Saphira.” Her eyes slid closed. “She came to me in my chamber. I was…upset.” Her cheeks turned the softest shade of pink before she added, “She gave me tea, only it wasn’t tea. It was something else. And then…then I was out.”

“Nice handmaiden.” If the witch weren’t already dead, he’d add her to his takedown list. “Too bad the king didn’t call off your binding ceremony to Zander earlier.”

And whoa, why the hell did he even care? And since when had he turned into Mr. Noble? He gave his head a swift shake and glanced toward the thick forest to the west in an attempt to clear his gray matter.

“My father did what?”

The shock in her voice nixed his thoughts and brought his head around before he could stop it. “You didn’t know?”

“No. He…” Her surprised chocolate eyes skipped over the ground. “He decided to let Callia and Zander be together?”

Demetrius shrugged, though inside, that darkness brewed deeper. If the king hadn’t reneged on the original arranged binding between Theron and Isadora weeks ago, neither of them would be here now. “Don’t know. Wasn’t there. Really don’t care.” He pointed toward the west. “I think our best bet is through those trees.”

“Wait. What was…?” She swallowed. “That thing looked like a Fury.”

Thank the flippin’ gods she’d changed the subject. He gathered the last of what was left of his weapons. “Furies have snakes in their hair. Like Apophis’s witches.” And trust me, Princess, they’re a thousand times worse. “That was a Harpy.”

He moved to pick her up, but she blocked him with her forearm. “What happened to my leg? The last thing I remember is stepping through the portal from Apophis’s castle into a field full of daemons. How did we get here? And”—her eyes widened—“what happened to Gryphon? He came through with us.”

Demetrius fought to keep his shoulders relaxed as he straightened. Here came the questions. He should have picked up his damn pace. “I don’t know.”

“What do you mean, you don’t know?”

“I mean, Your Highness,” he snapped, at the end of his patience with her and this place and all of it, “I don’t know what happened to Gryphon. When I opened the portal to get us the hell out of there, something crisscrossed and we wound up here.”

“Crisscrossed? That’s your best explanation?”

“That’s the only one I’ve got.” And the only one you’re gonna get.

“So where is Gryphon?”

“I don’t know.”

She stared at him, and then slowly her eyes narrowed to thin slits. A demeaning look he was used to seeing on her pale face. “What you really mean is, you don’t care.”

His head snapped back as if she’d hit him. She obviously couldn’t consider the possibility he was as worried about Gryphon as she was. But then, why would she? She thought he was a son of a bitch, which wasn’t far off the mark. And considering what had been running through his head a few minutes ago, if he wanted to find a way to get her off this island before Atalanta’s little scheme clicked into gear, it was better all around if she went on thinking he was nothing more than a righteous prick.

But it still cut. Just as it always did when she refused to look him in the eye or turned the other way when she saw him in the castle. Even if that was the only way it could be.

“Yeah,” he muttered as he rested his hands on his hips and glared down at her. “You’re right, Princess. I don’t fucking care.”

Her mouth snapped shut. She crossed her arms over her middle and looked down at her legs. If she was at all still hurting or upset, she didn’t show it. The tight line of her shoulders was a clear sign she was well and truly pissed. Which was exactly what he wanted, wasn’t it?

“Where the hell are we?” she asked without looking up.

Oh yeah, her adrenaline swing was in full gear. She’d morphed from scared shitless to ticked in the span of a few seconds, thanks to him.

Well, good. He handled pissed a whole lot better than freaked-out and vulnerable any day of the week.

He shifted his legs wider, crossed his arms over his chest. “Why don’t you tell me? Since you’re the expert on everything. Where the hell do you think we are?”

“Harpies and rabid boars—”

“Calydonian boars. There’s a big difference”

“Whatever. They don’t really exist.”

“Tell that to the two dead monsters down on that beach.”

Her eyes met his. Eyes, he noticed, that weren’t quite as enraged as he’d originally thought. Lurking behind the tough-girl shield was true fear.

Which, skata, he did not need to see.

“The Argonauts extinguished the lines,” she protested. “Thousands of years ago, that was the first thing Zeus commanded them to do. To sweep the world, gather the monsters wreaking havoc on humans, and destroy them. It’s in all the history books. They did that. They—”

“Your history books were obviously wrong. If you ever left that palace you call a bedroom suite, you’d know that.” Refusing to be moved by her shocked expression, he added, “Look around you. The Argonauts didn’t kill anything. They gathered and they dumped. Right here in the middle of the Ionian Sea. And lucky us, we followed.”

“Ionian Sea?” Shock flicked over her features. “Pandora isn’t a real island. It can’t be. It—”

“Looks pretty damn real to me.” He glanced up, noted the sun had now completely dropped behind the water and that dusk was creeping in fast. They were about out of time. The fresh kills down below were like blinking beacons to the nasties. They needed to get the hell out of here before the really ugly shit woke up and went hunting.

Far off in the forest below, a bloodthirsty howl echoed. Isadora’s head snapped in that direction and her eyes grew even wider until a halo of white surrounded her golden brown irises.

“Sounds pretty fucking real, too. Let’s save the bickering for later, shall we? We need to make tracks.”

“Wait,” she said when he bent toward her. “Open the portal and take us home.”

He clenched his jaw. “I can’t.”

“Why not?”

“Because whatever crisscrossed to get us here screwed with my ability to open the portal.”

She pressed a hand against his chest when he lifted her into his arms. A hand that was warm and soft and ignited a tingle in his skin he liked and hated all at the same time. “Demetrius…”

Bloody hell. He did not like the way she said his name. Didn’t like the sudden soft lilt to her voice or the way the sounds rolled off her tongue. And it didn’t make him think of hearing her say his name just like that when she was naked, beneath him, her head kicked back on a pillow—

“Pandora can’t be real. It can’t be.”

“Why the hell not?” He pushed the image out of his mind and looked down at her this-can’t-be-happening expression. It was all he could do to keep his face neutral as that tingle spread lower and his mind flashed back to the skimpy black nightie she’d been wearing when he’d first found her. To the way her skin had peeked out beneath the sheer black fabric. To the sway of her hips, the roundness of her breasts, the soft indent of her belly button…

“Because,” she whispered. “If the creatures are real, if Pandora is real, it means the myth is real. And according to the myth, there’s no way off the island. No one who’s been here has ever lived to tell about it.”

Like he didn’t know that? Reality snapped back firmly in his face. Welcome to my hell, Princess. Dying on this island wasn’t his greatest fear. It was being stuck here alone with her that scared the shit out of him.

He headed for the trees. “Then we’re gonna have to figure out a way to prove the myth wrong, now, aren’t we?”

“Yes, but—”

A scream joined the howl far below. Her hand gripped his shoulder. She pulled her body close to his on reflex. His skin warmed in response, and before he could stop it, a whole host of electrifying tingles erupted beneath her fingers where she held him, beneath her breast, pressed tight to his bare chest, then rushed straight down his torso, right into his cock.

Which he so didn’t need, now or ever.

He ground his teeth to the point of pain. And shoved a whole lot of I-don’t-give-a-shit into his voice when he said, “I liked you a lot better when you were unconscious.”

***

Tuesday, April 12th, 2011
Great review from Publisher’s Weekly (& a new excerpt!)

This just came in yesterday. A great review from PW on BODYGUARDS IN BED!!

Bodyguards in Bed
Lucy Monroe, Jamie Denton, and Elisabeth Naughton. Kensington/Brava, $14 trade paper (304p) ISBN 978-0-7582-1033-3

Three novellas form this well-mixed anthology of bodyguards who violate the big rule: no personal attachment to the client. In Monroe’s sexy whodunit, “Who’s Been Sleeping in My Brother’s Bed?” brilliant Ph.D. student Danusia flees to her brother’s empty apartment after her place is burglarized, and finds black-ops agent Maxwell Baker temporarily staying there. In Denton’s humorous “Hot Mess,” Alyssa, office worker for a security firm, heads to LAX to pick up whistle-blower Charles Rolston; the man in her passenger seat is actually handsome FBI special agent Noah Temple, who lets her think he’s Rolston through some hilarious hijinks and hot sex. In Naughton’s suspenseful “Acapulco Heat,” former army ranger Finn Tierney guards supermodel Lauren on a beach photo shoot with a male model whose family is a drug cartel. Variety and plenty of spice make for entertaining summer reading. (June)
Reviewed on: 04/11/2011
 
Pretty cool, huh? I totally didn’t expect a PW review, so it was a pleasant surprise.
And to whet your appetite a little more, here’s a new excerpt from “Acapulco Heat” (Be sure to scroll down and leave me a comment because I’m giving away an ARC of the anthology to one lucky commenter!)
***

The pounding bass gave Finn a fucking headache. The pulsing strobe lights messed with his equilibrium. But it was the woman out on Palladium’s dance floor, bumping and grinding and flirting with every shithead in the overcrowded club that grated on Finn’s last nerve.

Spring break was in full swing in Acapulco and the college crowd was packed to the rafters in the trendy nightclub perched high on a hill over the raging Pacific. Finn stayed on the edge of the dance floor, close enough to make a grab for Lauren if he had to, but far enough in the background to blend. She was a celebrity in a meat market. Guys were circled around her like vultures. And every minute that passed—every elbow he took to the ribs and every steroid enhanced moron who stepped on his feet—only jacked his badass mood higher.

Man, he was way too damn old for this scene.

Lauren threw her head back and laughed at something Santiago said. The dickwad grabbed her hand, pulled her close and dipped her on the dance floor. From his spot, Finn watched her golden hair flare out around her shoulders, her teeth sparkle and her eyes dance with mischief. He remembered the way she’d looked in her hotel suite earlier. The proposition that had been in her sweet baby blues. As Santiago’s arm slid around her waist and she rubbed up against him, Finn clenched his jaw and told himself enough was enough. This wasn’t about what had almost happened between them. It was about doing his job and keeping her fucking safe.

He crossed the dance floor, muscling his way between sweaty bodies. He should be nursing a beer in the hotel bar, kicked back watching SportsCenter and blowing off steam from the shitty day. Better yet, he should be sound asleep in his room, locked away from temptation and the really bad move he was about to make.

The song ended. Lauren laughed again, eased back from Santiago. As her arm came down, Finn reached in and snagged her by the wrist.

“Hey! What do you—?”

“I need to talk to you.”

He gave her points for resisting his tug, but the three inch heels and the damn miniskirt that showed way too much leg for his taste made it impossible for her to resist for long. He dragged her across the room, through the grinding bodies to a hallway that led to a series of bathrooms. The music wasn’t quite as loud here, but the walls still vibrated and bodies littered the corridor in groups of twos and threes. Spotting what he thought was a cluster of four, he rolled his eyes and knew this wasn’t going to work.

He looked right and left, picked out a darkened door that looked like access to a set of stairs. Pushing it open with his shoulder, he pulled Lauren through with him. The door snapped shut behind them, muffling the music and pulsing bass. Stairs curved up and out of sight. He dragged Lauren that direction, out of the chaos and up to the first landing where he pushed her back against the wall, trapping her between himself and the cool stones.

“What gives you the right to—?”

“Are you trying to get yourself raped?”

Fire flashed in her eyes. “What the hell kind of question is that?”

“What the hell kind of dancing was that?”

“Your job is not to critique my dancing.” She pushed a hand against his chest. Shoved hard. Didn’t come close to budging him. “Your job is simply to stand on the sidelines and watch, like a good little boy.”

“I know exactly what my job is.” The woman was like a tick that he just couldn’t get rid of. He should really step back. He was way too close to the edge and there was something about her that set him off. But instead of moving back he shifted forward, pressing into her hand and closing the gap between them. “My job is to stay close to you, Ms. Kauffman. That’s what I’m doing.”

Her long fingers and slim palm pushed against his chest again, which didn’t do anything but warm the skin beneath his black rayon buttondown. “I don’t want you close to me.”

“That’s not what you said a few hours ago.”

“A few hours ago I was obviously delirious from the sun, as you oh-so eloquently pointed out.  Now back off.”

“Why? So you can go back out there and rub up against some other guy? I don’t think so.” He moved even closer, until the heat from her hot little body circled his head, joining with the floral scent of her shampoo or perfume or whatever the hell it was to make him light headed.

She lifted her chin, but the tough-girl shield wavered. Her blue eyes settled on his, dropped to his lips. Those long fingers of hers curled into his shirt to tangle tight in the fabric. “I don’t like being pushed around.”

“That makes two of us,” he said. “And I’ve had enough of you flaunting your assets for every dick in this bar.”

“That’s not what I’m doing.”

“Bullshit.” Common sense told him he was heading into no-man’s land where only bad things happened. But instead of listening to those good ol’ instincts that had kept him alive for thirty-five years, he braced a hand against the wall and leaned down toward her mouth. “You want to get felt up in the middle of a club? Fine. We’ll do it right here.”

Her eyes shot back to his. “You wouldn’t dare.”

“Wouldn’t I? This is what you said you wanted, isn’t it? In yer suite? So come on with it. Let’s get busy. I’m ready right now.”

***

So what do you think? Leave me a comment and you’re entered to win an ARC of BODYGUARDS IN BED. Trust me, this is one hot anthology!!!

Wednesday, January 12th, 2011
The Words We Choose to Use

Larissa Ione and I were giggling earlier on Twitter about word choice, specifically tame swear words. Okay, I will admit my books tend to run on the colorful side where language is concerned. Luckily, I haven’t gotten any reader backlash about this but my mother often asks why I write like that when I don’t talk that way. (To which my hubby snorts and says, “She just doesn’t talk that way around YOU.”) I’ve never had a specific answer that pleases her, but the truth is I write what’s true to the characters. My adventure books tend to have a lot less colorful language because the characters in those books aren’t as dark as the heroes in my Eternal Guardians books. But the Twitter conversation got me thinking, and in retrospect, it’s interesting, the power word choices have on a book or situation.

Take, for example, the word “criminy”, which started this whole hilarious discussion. Now, it’s a tame swear word. One could choose to say crap, or shit, or the ever-colorful F-word, but those are less socially acceptable than “criminy” (especially in public when little ones are around). I have used the word criminy, maybe not as often as I should in place of other, more descriptive words, but it’s not an out-of-left-field word to me. Of course, there are those who will tell you “criminy” is out-dated. I sat in a writing workshop several years ago at RWA National where a very well-known NYT Bestseller said as much. “Who uses the word criminy? No one. Don’t use it in your books.” At the time I shrank down in my seat because my debut, STOLEN FURY, was about to come out and yep, you guessed it, one of my characters used that black-listed word. But guess what? People use it. Maybe not YOU, maybe not your close circle of friends, but it’s not a no-no word by any means.

A friend on Twitter said the image of a dark, yummy warrior using the word criminy made her giggle. I have to admit, it does me too. Which is part of the reason I think I’ll use it in my next EG book. Writers are always looking for ways to flip things around. Can’t you just see Zander or Titus or even Orpheus using the word criminy in the middle of a daemon battle? Totally unexpected, totally random, totally CLASSIC. (Especially for a smartass such as Orpheus.)

Of course, it’s this juxtaposition that makes the word work in a situation like described above. Where criminy would actually be entertaining and would fit a character like Orpheus, something like “oh, gosh darn” would never ever come out of his mouth. It wouldn’t even be said jokingly because it wouldn’t fit his character. It all comes back to being true to the characters, and that, ultimately is what writers strive to do. To make the dialogue and internals true to the characters so that no matter what words we choose to use, you, the reader, can imagine that character saying them.

Have you ever read a word in dialogue in a book that made you pause and think, “This totally doesn’t fit?”